Femslash Concrit

Title: None yet
Fandom: Rizzoli & Isles
Pairing: Jane/Maura
Word Count: <1000
Status: WIP, unbetaed
Note: This was supposed to be hot Maura-in-a-men's-suit fic, but it didn't want to be that. I'm happy with where it went, but it needs a bit at the end. And I just want some feedback before revising and posting.

( Rizzoli & Isles WIP )

Welcome to Femslash Concrit--a place for all your femslash fic concrit needs!

-Post a link to the fic you'd like some constructive criticism on; OR
-Post your WIP in a locked (or unlocked if you wish) comm post here!
-Please include the fandom(s), pairing(s), word count, and status (compete or WIP) in a header when posting
-Use a cut for anything over 100 words.
-We can't guarantee concrit; AND
-We also recommend posting longer (like close to and over 10,000k) works of WIPs in shorter parts
-if you'd like private feedback, note that in your header.
-if you're looking for concrit but would prefer to send your piece directly, post your header and make a note.